Agree or disagree: News sources in the past were more concerned about the accuracy of the news compared to the news sources today.
From early areas, human kind always wanted to communicate with other humans; our ancestors used smoke to send news. Also its accuracy of transferred information were vital for people living in that time . Since then up to now new ways had been invented such as news papers, telephone, TV etc. Hence, trusted source of news is chief issue at this century. When it comes to this point, some people think that news sources in the past were more reliable, while others believe that todays news sources are more valid than before. I count myself among the proponents of the later idea. I will explain my answer through two reasons in the following paragraphs.
At the beginning, in todays world news cycles fast owing to internet. Many people have access to the internet and use it for looking up information they need from different sites and news is one of those information. Every famous news broadcast has a website which release not only first hand news but also has live stream. Moreover, many other local, NGOs and so on, have news stations which broad cats news too. All of them wanted to be the chief source and trusted by people also other medium. So, they will try to be more careful that, what they broad cast be validate. For instance, I used read news on a local site but since they started to repeatedly sending sorry notifications for releasing wrong news, I stopped their newsfeed on my search engine and now I use another website. Later on I found that that news website closed because lost its validation.
In addition, some times, even trusted news sources start broad casting propaganda. However, out there, there is many sources to receive news and stop them from sending out false or exaggerated news program. For example during elections these happens and different parties try that but others reveal their cheatings. For example, my friend read an article from an online website , which uncovered that one of parties lied about their campaign sponsoring sources. Furthermore, it happens that news agencies twist their interviewer words and publish it on their platforms to make a populism around an issue. But, they cannot go far, because of interviewer complains and they remove news and post a sorry notice for their mistake. Lately cinema magazine published wrong news about a director and they enforced to take back the news after a couple hours they released that.
To make long story short, news broad casting mediums aim is to be known as a trusted one. Also they want to be the main source even other broad casting reference to them. As far as I am concerned, internet has a an important role here which is made it easy for all people around the world to access different news source. Also made it more competitive for news medium provide news and produce news programs more accurately that past time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81762295082 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36165836594 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553278688525 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1472561443 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4230769231 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415582197941 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125241437653 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101846341776 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295145553171 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453219241373 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.