Agree or not? a person should never make an important decision alone
Counseling and having some knowledgeable friends who people can trust them and ask them for help is one of the most necessary needs for everyone in this life. By asking for other's opinion, people can oversee their problems and take the best choice. On the other hand, if someone rely just on his information, may miss some important points, and it results in not making the best decisions. It is especially obvious when it is the case of most important issues of the life. In my view, all the people need to include others in the process of deciding about important issues, and I will elaborate on my opinion with the following reasons.
First and foremost, an individual does not have enough knowledge and experiences to take the best decision by himself. Making the best choice needs considering lots of information and using some valuable experiences which is not provided just by one person. If someone needs to choose between various options, he will surely need to take advantage of other's knowledge and it is feasible just by including them in his decision making and asking them to provide their experiences for him. By using of an experience of each person, people can gain a huge amount of information which helps them to take the best decision. My own life experience is a compelling example of this point. Four years ago, I decided to change my academic major to a completely different field. I knew this decision is important, and because I do not have adequate information, I need to ask others to help me. As a result, I contacted lots of my friends who had education in different fields and also talked to some of my teachers as well. Based on all the information I gathered, I could make my mind and chose my new major. Now, I realize how valuable those information were, and how they could cover my lack of experiences. In my view, this point can be expanded to all the people, and it proves why I believe all humans need to ask others for their knowledge to take the best decision.
Second, taking decisions by the help of others leads to finding more choices which results in making a better decision. Each person can see some specific aspects of each topic, and it is while asking others can show him all other probable options. Having more options to choose between them, helps people to not limit themselves into some choices, and it results on taking wiser and better decisions. For instance, last year, I wanted to start my own business. I asked almost all the people I knew and asked them to give me their opinion about a job which may have more chance of success in the future. After some months, I received tons of various opinions and could choose between them. Thanks to all those valuable options I could start my job which is doing well right now. This life experience showed me the necessity of asking others for making important decisions.
To sum up, a person know himself well, and it helps him to take good decision in some personal cases. On the other hand, in the case of important decision, people need to ask others for help. It can provide them lots of precious knowledge and experiences which may take a life time to obtain them by his own. Moreover, others can show him different options which he may not noticed them before. Based on these justifications, my conviction is that people need to ask others, when they are going to take important decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'relies'.
Suggestion: relies
...t choice. On the other hand, if someone rely just on his information, may miss some ...
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Line 1, column 638, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my opinion with the following reasons. First and foremost, an individual does n...
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Line 3, column 1128, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
... new major. Now, I realize how valuable those information were, and how they could cover my lack ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sked them to give me their opinion about a job which may have more chance of succ...
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Line 8, column 273, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...wledge and experiences which may take a life time to obtain them by his own. Moreover, ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2807.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 603.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65505804312 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52492341204 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409618573798 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6096888578 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7931034483 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7931034483 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27586206897 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10802718318 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386248564831 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435221393519 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803408800625 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143487902997 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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