agree/Disagree
Is it important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Historically, the majority of people have had a tendency to know more about various events around the world. In this regard, there is a controversial debate among individuals about the importance of this phenomenon. Some people may hold the view that following the latest news is beneficial for humans, while, some others take the opposite viewpoint. I firmly believe that knowing about the most recent events and happenings around the world can benefit people. In the following, I will elaborate upon my standpoint through two pieces of evidence.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the more people are informed about the events around the world, the more they would be financially thriving. It is generally agreed that political decisions play a monumental role in different aspects of people’s lives. In this circumstance, having enough knowledge about the ramifications of a decision can help people to make wise decisions about the economic aspects of their daily life. Take a personal experience as an example; when I studied in Tehran University, I used to review more than political and economic website thanks to my passion about the financial issues. By doing so, I could make a deep insight into the relationship between political decisions and the stock market. As a result, I invested more than three 300,000 dollars in our local market and gained more than 20 percent in this market. Had I not followed the political news those days, I could not gain a hoard of money in the stock market nowadays.
In brief, one can logically conclude based on the reasons mentioned above that following the latest news happening around the world can benefit him regarding its capability to foster his economic status and enhancing people’s general information. However, there are other reasons and examples, challenging these reasons, not mentioned above. All in all, it is highly recommended that a survey can assess the merits and demerits of this statement on people’s morale.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27472527473 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85276587813 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525274725275 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4651393177 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16030750261 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527701664525 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724037925401 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105265610856 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808490865649 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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