Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
When Aristotle said, "The key to strong friendship is honesty," he explained that being frank is crucial in friendship. When peope have the same destiny, they are stay together for a longtime. Personally, I believe that honesty is crucial in building relationship. I feel this way, for two reasons which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, Honest strengthen bondage between people who are in relationship. People turn into friends when they first meet because they share their experience after meeting. In addition, In order for their relationship to take further step they do not have to lie each other. Breaking up in relationship is caused by unfrank to each other. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About two years ago, I was working as a security guard in constuction company, and I had a partern whom I always lied about my home. I used to lie him that I live near the company, and I thought that it is not his bussiness to know my life. While cracking jokes, I told him about my home. This strengthen our friendship because after we realized that all came to work from long distance. We rent a ghetto and lived together, and we have been friends ever since.
Second, the being sincery in the relationship help people to find the perfect match friends. Friends with the same goas are more productive, and this happen through sharing what one believes without lying. Friendship tend to more productive by helping one another. For instance, When I was in high school I had class mate, she would make noise while I was studying and pretend that it did not bother me. After a the end of the term, I realized that I had failed because of me not warning her. Next term, I told her to change her behavior, and she also told me things to change. Being honesty to each other helped us to do well in that term.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that telling the truth in any friendship is always necessary. This is because it lead to people find friends whom they will work toward the same goals, and because it increases the closseness of people engaged which open path to help each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62894736842 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57896213744 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.250557651 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4782608696 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5217391304 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0851525544242 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286215283995 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601970842593 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553529739534 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042073572403 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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