Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays life seems more complicated and people tend to be more competitive compared to the past. It is not reasonable to just sit and watch others striving to succeed. Some people may hold the view that it is essential to plan and organize to succeed in this modern era. However, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that this method doesn't play an important role in one's prosperity. I agree with the former one. I will elaborate on my points of view in the following paragraphs.
The first noteworthy point to be mentioned is that planning and organizing is of great importance in order for people to achieve their goals and eventually succeed in their lives. Without having a specific plan, no one would be able to achieve his goals because although they might have many objectives and dreams but they are not able to manage their works and take the actions necessary for success. To illustrate, when someone hopes to become a doctor this person is required to take a difficult test in order to be able to enter university. Getting accepted in this major requires one to study very hard and it is almost impossible to pass this test without an accurate and organized plan. There are a great number of intelligent students who fail this exam and have to give up on their hope of becoming a doctor only because of not having a well-organized study plan.
The second reason which is worth some words is that people can save a great deal of time and get their works done when they have a specific plan for each day. In other words, when we know about the tasks which we have to accomplish in each day we tend to only concentrate on finishing them and avoid wasting our time on unimportant things. For instance, as a teenager I always used to write a plan for my summer. I planned to do a variety of activities in each day. For example, I managed to go to the gym, practice playing the piano, and improve my English and also hang out with my friends in a single day. Having a well thought plan enabled me to spend my time efficiently and make the best use of it instead of wasting it on useless activities.
In conclusion, it is my deep belief that in this modern world planning and organizing our activities has a great importance because it can help us save our precious time and spend it more logically and achieve our goals and thrive in our lives. Therefore, I highly recommend that every individual should have a well-organized plan to be able to make progress in every aspect of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... viewpoint and believe that this method doesnt play an important role in ones prosperi...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...method doesnt play an important role in ones prosperity. I agree with the former one...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53642384106 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56271900813 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498896247241 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9429368944 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.157894737 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8421052632 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237375590525 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707650039333 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570971730314 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134656869588 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215590793861 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.