Choose one of the following transportation vehicles systems and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.
Automobiles, Bicycles, Airplanes
The invention of the airplane in 1903 was one of the most successful achievements of all time that changed the world. The advent and revolution of aviation industry has had tremendous impact on our universe. I strongly believe that this breakthrough and discovery has an inordinate amount of benefits in the air transportation system. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first point I’d like to explain is that aircraft is the fastest way to get anyway. In other words, an airplane will significantly reduce the time journey, allowing you to start your vacation as soon as possible, which it can last a couple of days with a car, bus or train. If you only have a limited number of days, and truly you want to spend quality time at your destination, then flying still is your best choice. My own experience is a compelling example of this. About two months ago I decided to take a trip to Disneyland. My flight was early in the morning, and it took me approximately two hours to be in target place. Having preferred to travel with an airplane, as distinct from using a vehicle, I was able to be in my destination in the shortest possible period. If I had elected to drive and spend days in my car, it would drastically have cut down the amount of time that I could enjoy there. Furthermore, after finishing my holiday I was in my hometown in a matter of a few hours, while facing a return trip by car could be painful.
Secondly, flying is by far safer than traveling by car or taking a train. The old adage that flying is the secure way to trip still holds true today. On a daily basis, there are thousands of scheduled aircraft flights across the world, and yet we can go weeks or months without a fatal crash. Conversely, a road trip is not as protected and confident as an air trip. Put in other words, not only will the passengers arrive at their target place sooner, as soon as using a plane, but also it will keep their lives from possible hazardous accidents, which they can confront in a road trip. After returning from my vacation, I heard that there was a serious car crash on the way Disneyland to my homeland, which caused loss of human lives. Had I taken a road trip without considering these possibilities, now the worse incident might have taken place to me.
In conclusion, having considered the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, there is no doubt that the aircraft has modified and improved people’s lives in some ways. Not only planes extremely lessen the travel duration and save time, but also it provides an out of danger and assured trip.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63461538462 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72431372511 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4497192071 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5909090909 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077176518856 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214468194604 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349099993325 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540324534287 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035339016403 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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