do people pay a lot of money for their look
With the massive use of social media such as Instagram and Facebook. People now do care about how they look more than ever. Personally, I definitely think that the community as a whole is spending a lot of money on that. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, in in those days, the way you look is the way other people would judge you. My friend Sara's experience is an excellent example of this. When she and her sister wanted to apply for a new job, she dressed up to give a good impression to the HR department employees about herself, unlike her sister, who did not care about that. Eventually, Sara won the job! This is clear proof that a person's appearance is so crucial.
Second, getting clothing, accessories, bags, and all appearance-related things are easier to buy and obtain now. Obviously, with the spreading of online shopping websites, shopping now is more straightforward. Therefore, individuals tend to shop more. For example, I remember when I was in high school, I used to shop online on a website. One day the website was close.
To sum up, I firmly believe that people can spend thousands of dollars on their louoks. This is because your look is expressing yourself. Hence, people will treat you according to how it is, and the shopping methods now are easier than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, look, second, so, therefore, for example, i feel, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66108786611 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72045691729 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648535564854 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4369488493 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.625 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196183422299 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511087072416 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578051566862 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115186384355 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761633714562 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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