Do you agree or this agree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Blessed are those who lived in ancient or classic era with its simplicity. Nowadays, people seem to live in a high paced and interchangeable interval that provides them considerable amount of tied situations. This era called modern time which it needs individuals be well prepared by organized and planned manners. I strongly agree such statement due to social difficulties, economic hardships and health issues that are correlated with modernity.
First and for most, social plights have played an essential role since the dawn of human being. That is to say, we need to organize and plan our further steps with respect to our education, our marriage and so forth that are constituent of social aspects of our life. For instance, we need to plan our educational decision. Which high school we choose to continue our studying in or which University we opt to study in or to what extent we need to level up our degrees. These all need us to be well-organized and program each of our step.
Equally important is conquering our financial issues by planning and administrating ordered approaches. Under no circumstances is one be able to foster its goals without planning his/her allocation of monetary sources. In other words, people are more prone to face economic crisis who are accustomed with unorganized or unplanned manners. Those who spend inconsiderate will not be able to neither afford their children school's tuition nor afford the expenses of their children marriages.
Last but not least, we don't never know if one day we will be diagnosed with a fatal disease like cancer or so. Hence, we need to plan our life in a more healthy way. For example, we can organize our life style to be filled with more exercises and more physical activities. Approaches of this kind would help us in future to be more healthy individuals. By visiting and checking up regularly, we can be excluded of any disease.
In conclusion, I recognize planning and organizing our life the most effective strategy of a living person in this modern complicated era. Social, economic and health issues are the conspicuous factors that seem planning and organizing, convincing to me.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, with respect to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0027700831 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86964031222 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6042323115 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.05 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135578845769 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467216879303 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323231277621 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816088147845 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271109453749 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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