Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Try as people might, not to pursue news from other corner of the globe, they end up overwhelming about these days happening events even if those events have no essential influence on their life. I do believe that individuals will recognize happening events around the world significant. Due to human aid and sympathy, better acquaintance with others' qualities and also evaluating their own calibers, people are presumably apt to follow news from near to far corners of the world.
To begin with, we should take sympathy into consideration. This particular feature of human being is solely able to make individuals follow their pairs who are struggling in some plights from anywhere in the world. That is to say, people by seeing or knowing that there are other people from another nation suffering from a specific sort of disease or losing their houses because of a ongoing tornado or leaving their hometowns due to domestic wars, will become upset without being influenced by either of the crisis mentioned above. There are hundreds of philanthropic persons living on the earth and care about happening occurrences of the world.
Similarly, people can get acquainted with others' characteristics by hearing other events of the world. That is, people by pursuing events in abroad can better perceive other cultures, other costumes and simply other people. For instance, we can presume Brazilian as more robust and happier nation by seeing their dance festivals without having such festival in our country.
Last but not least, we are able to evaluate our calibers better by watch other events held in the world and compare to that of ours. By checking on economic growth or decline in Europe and compare it our economic situation we can easily find our true and conspicuous standing in financial world. It's inevitably important for me to see which countries welcomes more tourist to gain a simple feedback of tourists concerning to my country.
In conclusion, there might be some dormant viewers all around the world who don't care about others in different nations, though, I will try to follow as much as events I can to see if some people need aid, to understand other races better and know my position in the world, respectively as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00534759358 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62639261608 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561497326203 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1655476828 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166120039507 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670747934852 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565284353809 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100048233636 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555334178244 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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