do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To keep our circle small seems more beneficial for us as human being than to explore and try to make emotional bonds with new other people. It may seem isolating ourselves from new environments and limiting our relations to whom we already have built our companionship with, but owing to the facts that our old memories are worthwhile, we have already chosen our trusted persons and become exposed to the risks that new friends are troubled with I recognize old friends more valuable and crucial to continuing our lives.
In the first place, nothing would be a proper substitution to our childhood memories. Thereby, even if we find new friends, they always lack of some old and unchangeable feelings and memories which we have made with an old friend. For example, one who has an old valuable friend for 20 years would not pursue to explore and find new ones. He/she will find soothe in recalling old memories with that special friend from childhood or those days when they had started 2nd grade.
Similarly, the most trustworthy people whom we are in touch with are no one than our old friends. Needless to say, people share almost every essential event of their life with their close friends. Decisions about marriage, occupation or even very basic ones like where they want to spend a long vacation. On the other hand, people would unfold their secrets and mysteries tied to their life, therefore they only would share those with their special old friends who has proved his/her royalty to them for several years of companionship. That is why, old friends are much more significant.
Last but not least, there are some people who acts conservatively with respect to find a friend. People may recognize finding new people and making emotional bonds difficult. Thereby, they prefer to keep their circle small and stay with those reliable friends whom they found in primary stage of life such as: school, day cares and so forth. Obviously, they find keeping their old friends more important than the other choice.
To put it in a nutshell, I strongly support the idea of having old friends instead of making new ones. Childhood memories, trustworthy and the risks of being in new relations seems undeniable and adequately convincing to me. Nevertheless, some may seek for new companionships most of the people would refuse it due to aforementioned reasons.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, with respect to, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92481203008 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5712844449 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7585113462 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225602518382 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862008345711 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597712272063 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13876982 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220592865047 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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