Do you agree or disagree? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A human is defined by its relationship with other people and these communications are one of the most essential aspects of human life. But people have various approaches in their relationships. Some may think that telling truth and being honest is the most important factor in any relationship; while others disagree. I, personally, subscribe to the former idea for two important reasons.
To begin with, it is an inevitable fact that, trust is the foundation of every successful relationship between humans. A relationship that you cannot trust your partner is a stressful connection, because you are always wondering if he or she is telling the truth and you cannot focus on your relationship and overcome upcoming challenges. To give a tangible example, I had a girlfriend three years ago, which I liked her a lot. After the first anniversary of the start of our relationship, I have found that she had lied to me in some occasions. After that day I was always in stress that if she is lying to me again and that was the main reason the our relation did not last long after that.
The second reason which is worth mentioning is that you can be informed from other approaches and solutions in solving problems you are facing with. When you do not tell the whole truth about your issues and challenges to your partner, you are forced to handle them by yourself. While the advantage of telling the truth is that he or she may have the experience in that field or guide you through the problem. For instance, once I was facing a problem in my master’s degree project and I could not find a solution for that. It took me a lot of time to overcome the problem and I did not tell my girlfriend because I did not want her to think less of me. When I finally told her about the issue, I surprisingly found that she even had a simpler solution for the problem.
In summary, with all this taken into account, I, strongly, believe that we should value our relationships by telling the truth and trusting each other. In fact, not telling the truth will provide unnecessary stress in our relationship and the destroy the feeling of security which have devestating effect on the future of our relationship. Furthermore, we will be alone in facing challenges that could be easily handled with the help of our partner. That is why I think telling truth is on of the most essential considerations in every relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...oaches in their relationships. Some may think that telling truth and being honest is ...
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Suggestion: lain
...relationship, I have found that she had lied to me in some occasions. After that day...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...o me again and that was the main reason the our relation did not last long after that. ...
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...ecessary stress in our relationship and the destroy the feeling of security which have deve...
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Line 4, column 487, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...r. That is why I think telling truth is on of the most essential considerations in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, for instance, i think, in fact, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68235294118 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82213298802 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9356920237 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.736842105 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25533382651 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793070339296 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794966118927 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15246961012 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128543765463 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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