Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the civilized and modernized society the concepy of friendship state in the high stage of other relationship. it is inevitably that firenship make the fundamental comunication in our life. A plethora of people possesses the idio that maintain friendship with a small number of people have positive effectioan rather than attending in a variaty of group. Although having firends in any walk in our life have advantages, I strongly believe that
I believe that having a small number of friends will help us to improve our happiness or our quality of our life. I will delve resons to delicate my idea as subsequent paragraph.
The first sqisite reaon that I would like to mention is that large number of relationship reqires a plentiful times. For example I remember when I was in high school every member of my class were my friends. accordingly, I wast my time with my friends.I would like to stressed that I couldn't find time for my assighnment, In this regard I failded in my exam. beside, I was never be intimate with them since they were just my firend to saying joks or sparetime. I would were more successfulin my career had I just a few firend.
whereas, my classmate consentrat on their lesson I jost past my time to be acceptible by them.
Another noteworthy reason which support this opinion is that, as an idiom which is saied a friend in need a firend indeed, If we have a little goup of duddies, we could sit infront of them vent our emotional and be free that a person which sand in front of ous dosn't heart or misunderstood from our talk. I drew my own experience. I have a firend from high school whenever i spend time with her I never find who the time pass we have alot common interest and I am alway happy besides her.
To put it briefly, I would like mention that you can have a variety of people inside, but you might not be happy and always see your lonyless. accordingly, I resist that people should have a smal group of friends that help them to improve thire life rather than wast time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, briefly, but, first, if, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53005464481 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62577403844 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543715846995 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5503921605 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159361935982 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520304078286 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497260156185 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828144546558 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373419638438 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.