Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and ex
It is axiomatic that for survival, human beings depend on friends. Apparently, some friends are always with you or you meet with your friends once in a year or so or some are just recent friends, the amount off happiness cannot be weighed on a measuring scale and hence which is more important is difficult to judge. Happiness is just happiness, and the factors leading to it cannot be more important or less important. But still some people are always up for an heated debate over the question that friendship with small group of people over long time crucial in happiness rather than the happiness in the ability to make new friends. Personally I agree with the former one. I will delve into the reasons why i feel so, and hence illustrate my rational in my following essay.
First and foremost, I think that friendship is trust. If there is not trust then be it an friend who is with you for a long time or a new friend, who got acquainted with you recently, either of them will not look forward to you and give happiness because they do not have faith in you. in other words, trust is the crux of everything. For instance, If a friend of your tells something which is not to be shared with anyone else, and you just forget to do so. He/she comes to know from other person that you are sharing that information that he has told you to just keep up to you, your friend will lose his trust in you and never again share anything with you.
Another thing that comes to my mind is that friendship with long time friends is one way better because these friends are aware of your strengths and weaknesses. Long time friends when in a small group are more than better because less people , there is less confusion and more strong binding.
But to also mention that making new friends is also of utmost importance because in this progressive world we are continuously on the go and keeping in touch with old friends is not possible always. We meet friends at out work place, on business tours, at classes and although these friends do not know all about your past and other attributes, but they meet you everyday and it just becomes a routine with them. Also sometimes these new friends help you in critical situations which need immediate action contract to which an old friend in another city or country cannot reach you immediately.
Hence I feel that friends be it new or old , for the pursuit of happiness we should preserve both for long time. Even if being with small group which you are familiar of from a long time give you happiness and satisfaction , the fact that new friends can also generate utmost happiness cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, look, so, still, then, another thing, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54507337526 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37077108881 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454926624738 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9718421042 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.444444444 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387801985525 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129698058208 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829563962646 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232118351221 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617370421691 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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