Do you agree or disagree with the following statement After completing high school students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? After completing high school, students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some might believe that taking a year off after completing high school is waste of time. however, I think otherwise. students should take a year off before they start studying at a university, which they will utilize it in working or travelling. this is because, it will relax them. Another reason is, this will be very helpful in deciding their career.

To begin with, students should enjoy holiday for a year in which they travel as, it will relax their mind. The life in a high school is very sedentary in which students are usually confined in between school, studies and home. therefore, after completing a high school they should deserve a year off to travel or work. my own personal experience is a compelling example of this. when I was in high school, I felt my life was very frustrating. so, when I finished my high school, I took a break from my studies and made a trip to Europe tour. I travelled to different places. I learned many things, made new friends and it was a very different experience. My mind felt so relaxed. therefore, it is very important that after completing high school students should take break of a year to travel.

In addition, if a student will take a year vacation to work or travel it will increase their horizon of learning. When the students start a university they were very confused about deciding their major, but if they take a year vacation they can better decide about their career. For instance, when I started my university it was very difficult for me to select a major because of which I wasted my 2 semester. However, one of my friend she was so much focused about her career and she knows what subjects to study. This is because, when she finished her high school she started to work as a assistant in an art museum. She learned alot and at that point she had decided what are her interest. As a result, it is very beneficial to have a year break after completing a high school.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54571428571 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50796120141 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454285714286 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.93037344 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3181818182 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307884304467 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102056248169 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105175460416 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234881229541 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055450231 0.0645574589148 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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