Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? After completing high school, students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people's attitudes toward studying at university brings to the light a question that whether students, who graduate from high school, should take at least a year off to work or travel before they start studying at a university. Although some people assert that working and traveling experience is important for students, I am against the opinion.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that students who have just completed high school are not mature enough to work or travel by themselves. To be more specific, most of the students are under eighteen years old when they complete high school. They are not independent and can not protect themselves while facing emergencies. Take my personal experience for example. Before going to study at college, I found a part-time job during summer vacation. However, I did not pay attention to the contract of the job and later there was a problem with my salary. Eventually, my parents helped me to deal with the wage problem since I did not know how to cope with it.
Another point I should deem is the fact that students should gain working and traveling experience after graduating from the university. To delineate, during studying at a university, students can learn more specific and practical knowledge which is more valuable in working. What is more, they can also learn social skills, which will be helpful while traveling, since there are different people in college. For example, one of my friends worked after he completed high school. He received a little amount of salary since he could only work with some simple tasks. Nevertheless, after he graduated from college, he had the ability to accomplish more complicated projects. As a result, he gained tremendous money after the work. It is more beneficial for students to work or take a trip after completing university.
Last but not least, it is not necessary for students to work and travel right after completing high school. Admittedly, working and traveling around the world can broaden students' horizons and help them step out of their comfort zone. However, it is more important to prepare their university life before going to university. Life in college would be extremely different from what they have experienced since some of them need to study in another state or country. Students should spend their time on preparing for the coming university life instead of finding a job and taking a trip.
What can be concluded from the aforementioned reasons and examples, therefore, is that students who have just graduated from high school do not need to take at least a year off to work or take a trip before studying at university. They are not mature enough and they should work or travel after completing university.
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Suggestion:
...pleting university. Last but not least, it is not necessary for students to work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94646680942 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68498405732 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464668094218 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.982711123 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4583333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401216961838 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117654438363 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970582901741 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270425787984 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824920523249 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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