Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records. Which approach do you prefer, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people's attitudes toward social networks brings the light a question that has been asked several times, that is, whether people should record their experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Although some people assert that recording events on social media would lead to negative effects, I prefer to create records online and believe that its pros exceed its cons.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that it is much easier to exchange opinions through the internet. To be more specific, everyone could read the records through social media, and they can express their own perspective and feedback on others' posts. For example, last week I wrote a post that is about a movie I watched, and I wrote my own viewpoint of the story. After I uploaded it, one of my friends immediately told me that she had watched that movie and she totally agree with my opinion. We had spent lots of time discussing the plot and exchanging our feedback through social-networking sites.
Another reason I should deem is that uploading records to the internet is more convenient than writing records on the traditional diary. To delineate, keeping records on the traditional diary, which is made of paper, is troublesome for people who want to paste photographs on it since pictures must be printed. However, when it comes to keeping records online, people can upload their pictures just for a second. Moreover, traditional diaries have limited space to write, but social media do not have restrictions on storage. As a result, people can put as much information in their posts as they want.
Last but not least, it is easy to search and save posts through social media. The traditional diary would be lost if people do not store it carefully. Nevertheless, if that information was saved online, people can easily find it by pressing buttons on the sites. Thus, the information can be saved more carefully by uploading records to social-networking sites.
What can be concluded from the aforementioned reasons and examples, therefore, is that creating records online is a great way to record people's life. Keeping records online is a convenient way to record experiences and also a means of sharing opinions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
... had watched that movie and she totally agree with my opinion. We had spent lots of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05026455026 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85310438672 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8880208241 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.055555556 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393233315745 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118364216318 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784850016898 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221187074194 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893265335802 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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