Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
By pasting the time, habitats, emotions, and thoughts of human are changed. They may have some emotions that were not in the past. There are several causes of these changes. Some people think nowadays people are less satisfied and less happy than what were in the past, they think high speed of the world-changing is the reason. In my way of thinking, changing the world could not be the reason of happiness or sadness of people, also it has nothing to do with satisfaction.
The first reason that can be stated here is that the world is changing in a good manner. The science and technology help people to have a better life. Today people do not need to do hard works because of invention and progress of mechanical machines, also they are not concerned about strange illnesses since the medical science can cure various disease. All of these facilities help people to be more satisfied with their life, while in the past there were many undetected disease that killed many people, or men and women worked very hard together for passing their life. I think in the past people had more difficulties in their life, while now they are more satisfied since the world is changed, and it is leading to be better and better every day.
The other point that deserves some words here is that there may are many sad and unhappy people in the world nowadays, but its cause is not world-changing. It is due to habitats-cahnging. In the past people had the sense of humanity, they help each other in difficulties, they were concerned about their neighborhoods, they visited each other more. But nowadays, people are more alone, they do not tend to have contact with others, they make themselves busy by internet and cell phones, they usually chat instead of visiting and face to face contact, so it leads them to have a sadness life.
To summarize, nowadays people are more satisfied with their life because of technology and science improvements. There are several factors that affect people life but world-changing is not one of them. If people today are more depressed and unsatisfied, it is because the traditional habitats are changed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79891304348 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6322251812 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45652173913 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9938048027 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.882352941 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345979283575 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112474912117 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841052424287 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236217865868 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704494697314 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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