Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
The progress of technology and science have made many differences in the pattern of human life. It has made it more complex. For example, today there are many different job's opportunities. All people try to get success in their life by getting best jobs. There are many factors that help them to achieve their goals. I think that one of the most important qualities that nowadays people need to have is the ability to plan and organize.
The first reason that can be mentioned here is that if people want to find a suitable job in future, they need to plan from the teenage because nowadays many careers need special talents and academic skills, so people should have ability to plan for long time to choose what field they are interested in and what occupations help them to success. After that, they can step on the way and do everything planed before. However, in the past life was more simple, usually people had simple jobs and they did not need to make long time plan for finding a good career.
The other point that deserves some word here is that today time is very important. The better manage the time the better chance of succeed. In the complicated world that we are living now, managing time is very important. If lose their time, people cannot do all of the duty well, so it will fall them behind others. For managing time, people should have ability of organization. They should put a daily schedule for themselves and do it cautiously then they will do as much work as possible.
To summarize, in the complex world, it is necessary for people to have ability to make a long time plan and determined a organized life to save time. That is the way they can succeed in the life. Who do you think is not agree with this thesis.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e complex. For example, today there are many different jobs opportunities. All people try to g...
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Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...t if people want to find a suitable job in future, they need to plan from the teenage bec...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'manages'.
Suggestion: manages
...oday time is very important. The better manage the time the better chance of succeed. ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...t. If lose their time, people cannot do all of the duty well, so it will fall them behind ...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to make a long time plan and determined a organized life to save time. That is th...
^
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s the way they can succeed in the life. Who do you think is not agree with this the...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52215189873 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3105405386 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.8405968726 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3888888889 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290403455481 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905337728297 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676062106679 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193925065612 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664476576144 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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