Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether people are happier today than in the past or not. While some people believe that people in the past have many things that make their life enjoyable, I hold the opposite view. I think the advent of technology makes people’s lives happier than in the past.
To begin with, people today have many small electronic devices that allow them to communicate with family. They can talk every day with family and friends and share all events that make them happy. For example, I bought my iPhone when I came here to the United States, so I was able to talk with my mother and my friend Hassan twice a day. These calls made my days and allowed me to get a big boost to finish my study. On the other hand, people in the past lack electronic devices that allowed them to contact with people who loved. As a result, they become worried about each other and lack the communication happiness.
In addition to electronic devices, people today are able to travel in short time. There are many ways of transportation that help them to be more comfortable. For instance, people use the airplane to go from Japan to France. It only takes few hours to arrive there, moreover, people will set in very comfortable seats that sometime become beds for sleeping purposes. Unlike people in the past, they used to travel on their horses for many months in order to reach their destination. Furthermore, they might have some diseases from the direct exposure to heavy dust and winds.
Last but not least, people today have perfect health treatment methods that make their life easier. They can survive from several critical diseases because there are many cure options. For example, Mohamed Ali was able to live several years with his Parkinson Disease because he was treated in very advance hospital at Arizona State. Thus, he was happy to live more years with his family and fans. Unlike people in the past, they died immediately when they suffer from any diseases.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people today are happier than people in the past. This is not only because they have electronic devices to contact with family, but also they can travel easily and cure their diseases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... travel easily and cure their diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in short, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75064267352 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30544684391 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52442159383 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5244438695 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6818181818 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235414185096 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788525224767 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557186866683 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150459209623 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027185554338 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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