Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, educating children is considered to be a challenging practice among people. There are several devices that disrupt kids from studying such as cell phones or other video games. However, I think young people today are more willing to study than they were in the past. I feel this way for a couple of reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, today, the arrival of technology enhances the education system. Children seems to have fun whenever they go to school because they can use several technological devices while they are studying such as projector and some advance computers. These advance technologies allow these children to enjoy more while they are obtaining knowledge from their teachers. For example, In Japan, most elementary schools allow kids to use their Ipad in the education process. Children can see the lecture from the Ipad, moreover, they can do their homework through it. Furthermore, these technological devices enable them to search about any information related to the subject, so they can improve their searching skills. In additions, some teachers allow kids to play some educational games in class. All these positive technique makes the educational process today easier than before.
Adding to the previous point, Children today spend most of their time at school. They spend almost 12 hours or more sitting and practicing at school. This is the new educational technique that makes kids finish all their homework before they leave school, so they can spend the remaining hours with their family without doing any homework. For instance, in japan, kids spend 13 hours at school. Therefore, whenever they go home, they can stay with their family or play some video games.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that educating children today is easier process than it was in the past. This is not only because the advent of technology makes the educational process more fun, but also, kids spend more times in school today than they were before.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1094224924 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5008308779 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51367781155 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3480405992 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4736842105 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258642270457 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904220355306 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488089255317 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182459317908 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429924254896 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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