Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is one of the fascinating activities because it introduces people to new cultures and expertise. Personally, I think that voyaging in a group led by a tour guide is more advantageous for tourists than traveling on their own. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, when people travel with a guide, they can learn a lot about their new destination since they will be told a myriad of historical facts and details about the place. Not only this, but a tour guide can introduce visitors to locals, who are the best source of knowledge when someone wants to understand another culture. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When a couple years ago my friend and I visited Paris, we rented a car and decided to explore the city without any external help. It was a great experience, however, a few times we got lost on the streets and for that reason, we were not able to look at all mentions that the wanted to see. On the other hand, when last summer, my husband a I traveled to Germany we hired a tour guide who knew exactly where to go and so, we saw a myriad of monuments and listened to many interesting stories about each of them.
Furthermore, voyaging in a group headed by a guide is safe and can benefit families with children. Parents are always concerned whether or not they should take their kids with them on a vocation because any adventure can be risky. However, being in a company of a tour guide can minimize a risk of having issues. For instance, during the trip to Germany, which I mentioned above, my spouse and I did not have problems finding a cafe, a restroom, or a hotel to spend safely a night. Our guide had always a solution. He knew which restaurant prepared delicious food and which hotel had a better service. All the time, during the journey, I felt protected and enjoyed every minute of the trip. As a result, if next time we decide to travel to another country and have our children with us, we will definitely take an assistance from a tour guide.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the best way to examine new places is to hire a tour guide. This is because it provides explorers with the knowledge about a destination and guarantees an excellent time-spending.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52542372881 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6164107102 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55205811138 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1801564561 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3684210526 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15690720127 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476029227154 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435247486301 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107840538134 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025482260301 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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