Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The pace of modern life is fast and sometimes overwhelming. However, these days, people have more opportunities to enjoy it. Personally, I think that people are happier today than it was in the past. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
First of all, nowadays, we have more opportunities to travel. Education, which is today available for the majority of the population, provides young citizens with professions, which can benefit them financially for the rest of their lives. If a person has a well-paid job, he or she can afford traveling. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I am a pharmacist and fully satisfied with my salary. Every month I am capable of saving some money for things I like to do the most. I am passioned for exploring new destinations. In this way, every year, during a vacation, I take a trip to places I have never visited before. On the other hand, my parents, who did not have a chance to attend a college when they were young, did not have a job, which could let them save money on voyaging. Moreover, the transportation at their time was not as advanced as it is now. That is why I believe that my being is fascinating in comparison to my parents` life.
Secondly, millennials are connected to each other to a higher degree than their ancestors. With the development of the Internet and social networking websites, people from all around the world can communicate easily and keep in touch with their families and friends who are at long distances. Facebook, Instagram, and Skype are only a few examples of websites and software applications, which help people to socialize. For instance, I have been living in the United States for almost four years. Despite this, I talk to my family members from Russia every other day and continuously participate in their lives. Furthermore, on Christmas and a New Year Eve, we turn on Skype, so we can celebrate together. It warms my heart and makes me feel like I am at home with people, whom I value the most. Conversely, as my mother told me, when she was of my age and moved to a big city, she could not talk to her parents often because of lack technology at that time. This example endorses my point of view.
To conclude, I strongly believe that today people are more satisfied with their lives than it was before. This is because they can explore the world and stay in touch with their beloved ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...s a well-paid job, he or she can afford traveling. My own experience is a compelling exam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62237762238 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74504598602 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543123543124 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9351429355 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2692307692 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183824668778 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501250254627 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544671525077 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140695621535 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705047063718 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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