Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Traveling is one of the most amazing activities people can do, and having a person who knows more and can lead results in a memorable experience. traveling in a group which one of the members is a tour guide can be the best way to travel, because it will be more interesting and safe. I would like to elaborate on my opinion with the following reasons.
First, tour guides can decrease the chance of getting lost in the trip. One of the biggest problems almost all passengers have is the lack of knowing the destination place, and it may result in getting lost. On the other hand, a tour guide who has some experiences of being in that place can lead people, and they do not need to worry about going far away of their place and having a memorable adventure. My own experience is a compelling example of this point. Last summer, I decided to have a solo trip and wanted to spend some time in a jungle in north part of my country, Iran. I packed all my staff and without asking anyone started my trip on my feet. After some hours, I found myself in the deepest part of the jungle, and I did not even know where I am. It took almost five hours to find my way back, and also I hurt my hand so bad. Besides that, I was really scared, and really regret why I did not ask why friends to come with me. I believe if I had this trip as a group trip and we had a tour guide with us, that trip could be one of the best experiences in my life, and that is why I think the rule of a tour guide in a trip is really important and necessary.
Second, a tour guide can show people all places worth visiting which common people may not know them. The people who are living in the place we are traveling can be a good help, but a tour guide knows all places which tourists find them most attractive, and are eager to spend some time there. To bring an example I can mention to an experience of my sister. Two years ago, she went to India, and expected to visit all historical and ancient places there. When she arrived there, she asked the people about places she should make sure to visit them, and based on their opinion she spent two days in places which was not interesting to her but the Indian people liked them. When she came back, she was really sad about not having a tour guide with her, and said if I could have a tour guide , she/he could take me to places which are interesting to me not just to the the native people of India. Based on this experience I can explain why I believe the best way to travel is having a tour guide .
To sum up, traveling is not cheap or safe these days at all, and we can not risk spending lots of money, and going to a place where we do not have anyone to guide us. Tour guide have lots of experiences about different aspects of traveling to a place, and they can be the best people who can guide us in a trip. The bottom line is that if we want to assure an enjoyable trip, the best way is to go with a tour guide .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2371.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 579.0 407.700716846 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09499136442 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90534594407 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16166021487 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414507772021 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 15.0 1.86738351254 803% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.619761682 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.086956522 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1739130435 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152848673781 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565630716758 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605685850953 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129955823343 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564626067982 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.74 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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