Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays traveling has become extensively interesting across the globe and large number of trips, tours, travels, etc., are happening in the world. In this regard, some people think that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. On the other hand, many consider the traveling a personal enjoyment which should not be done with others. I firmly believe that the best way for people to travel is to do it by their own and not in a group because traveling in a group take the people' s freedom in their traveling and tours. In addition, opportunities associated with traveling such as learning new cultures would evaporate into the sky when people travel within a group.
Freedom is one of the inherent elements of traveling. When people travel to other places, they need to be free to go where or when they want. Now, Is it really best for a person who is traveling with a tour since tour leaders and other members in the group determine when to sleep, where to go, what to eat, etc.? On this basis, taking the proposed types of the freedom is the main disadvantage to travel in a group. In contrast, when you are traveling by yourself, you have unlimited freedom in time and space. Furthermore, you are more free to learn new things.
The other reason for people to travel is to learn new things. Usually, new cultures, languages, ways of communication, etc. attract people who travel. Once people travel alone, they have more time to learn these things but when they do it within the group lots of time would be used to learn about other members. As a result, traveling in a group does not provide people with the new opportunities as it does when you are travel alone. So, It seems that the best way to travel is not in a group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e best way to travel is not in a group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, really, so, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49371069182 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45422674321 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459119496855 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.791236828 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0588235294 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263508879968 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102934226288 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758005261908 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201012700897 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393358771248 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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