Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, attraction to advertising has exceedingly increase[st1] d amongst companies and manufacturers across the globe. Selling fresh products in the competitive market is the major contributor to increase in the number of advertisements. In this regard, most companies implement techniques to exhibit their products with higher quality than they really are. I think that ads make merchandises seem more refined and better compared to their real caliber because they highlight product' s pros and hide their cons. In addition, what the ads show is usually the top quality, may be handmade, of a product not what companies make in the mass market.
Achieving high level of selling for a product relies heavily on its advertisement. Companies selling their outcomes in the market know that advertising would play a major role in amounts of purchasing the products by costumers. As a result, they use different techniques to make their ads more interesting and without faults. Consequently, a product's pros have been exaggerated with dexterity and its cons would be hide professionally. Taking the Apple company as an example, they emphasized on the developed eye-detector technology once they were introducing the IPhone 8 but they totally hide its procrastinating nature of the eye-detectors.
Companies use their perfect version of a product when they want to make an advertisement. This theory is correct especially in area of a mechanical product. Bugatti would create the handmade version of its new car for introducing it into the market but what they send for retailers to sell is totally different compared to that high quality version. thus, a handmade product generally differs from the version they sell in the mass market.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, really, thus, i think, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31272727273 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11801165716 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1337971788 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173862525758 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670599442578 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485286554439 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126756445666 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457124086379 0.0645574589148 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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