Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travelling to different places is one of the most interesting activities nowadays. When it comes to the question whether the way of travel is in group led by a tour guide, people adopt spread spectrum of attitudes toward this question depending on their characters and educational backgrounds. On the one hand, there are people who adhere to the belief that travelling individually will give them a sense of freedom to have an adventurous travel; on the the other hand, others believe that traveling in group with a leader has outstanding merits. As far as I am personally concerned, the latter carries further weight since not only does the leader assist them to visit the most attractive places during their travel but does having a partner during the travel make it more enjoyable.
Leader tour typically travel to same places several time due to their career. So they are familiar with different places such as fancy restaurants, giant shops, ancient places and so on, as a result of which they can help people who have never been there where they should go first. Then, people will not be unhappy when they come back their home due to missing vissting some interesting places or purchasing a delicious souvenir form there. Moreoevr, group leader also provide a plan before they travel to a city, as a result of which travellers have enough time to visit diversity of places during their travel. Besides, having an organized travel will also aid travellers to save their money. Subsequently, provided travellers want to have an enjoyable travel, they should travel in group having a leader.
Having a partner also make a travel more enjoyable in different ways. First, there are some boring time during travel which people like to communicate with a person to spend their time disposing of that. For instance, some times travles need a long ride which typically make travellers annoyed, in this case having a partner with whom travellers can talk, will make this annoying part of travel more attractive. Moreover, having a close friend will also help travellers to have more enjoyable time when they stay in a particualr city or place. In fact, some times there may be some problems during the travel which can be solved receiving help from our friend.
To wrap it up, travelling in group led by tour guide is more advantageous since not oly does the tour guide make the travel more easier but also does having a partner during the travel make the travel more enjoyable. Therefore, if I want to travel in future, I will travel in group with one of my close friend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: the
...eedom to have an adventurous travel; on the the other hand, others believe that travel...
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Suggestion: the; the
...eedom to have an adventurous travel; on the the other hand, others believe that travel...
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Suggestion:
...venturous travel; on the the other hand, others believe that traveling in group w...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
... leader. Having a partner also make a travel more enjoyable in different ways. First...
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...are some boring time during travel which people like to communicate with a person...
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Suggestion: easier
...oly does the tour guide make the travel more easier but also does having a partner during t...
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Suggestion: in the future
...joyable. Therefore, if I want to travel in future, I will travel in group with one of my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85909090909 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51791514834 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6780288551 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.764705882 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8823529412 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153751930148 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699128894113 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450982679631 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123829030001 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414686743665 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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