Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
when it comes to design a trip, people in general believe that travel by themselves is more interesting. they claim that most tour groups spend much time on shopping or other unnecessary schedules. however, I believe it is meaningful to travel in a group with a professional tour guide. In the following essay, I will present three reasons to support my stance.
First of all, having a trip with a tour guide can lead us to know more about the history or specific culture in the area. Even, we have done many studies before the trip, but there may still have some information that we do not know or not think it is important.
For example, the table culture of Western is totally different from Eastern, especially the way to use a chopstick. if travelers do not have a good guide to teach them the difference, they would be curious when having deals.
What's more that it is more convenient to travel in a group because we could be not worried about transportation. During a trip, the traffic way is always a big problem. if we plan to go somewhere less public transportations have stops at, it forces us to forgive the original plan. however, if traveling in a group, people can commute between scenic spots by private bus. it is more comfortable than getting public transportation by ourselves.
Lastly, it is safer, especially, we are not familiar with the language used there. While encountering any difficulties, the tour guide could help us immediately. also, he/she is more familiar with the regulations there, they can help to maintain our rights when meeting friendly shop owners.
having a tour in a group and leading by an experienced tour guide is not only efficient but also learning more. To consider safety and the time we could save from worrying the traffic ways, travel in a group is worth to be chosen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, so, still, while, for example, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77742946708 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75288660253 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564263322884 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8567869506 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197761181951 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647641543288 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508724211758 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102960194252 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506447359096 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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