Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this sophisticated and progressive world, travel plays an important role in human life. Many people prefer traveling solely without any organized tour while some people like to join a group for traveling. Personally, I prefer to travel in a group led by a tour guide. To support this idea I provide three main reasons which I will explore in this article.
First of all, I prefer to have the pleasure of nature or the cities which I travel rather than wasting time on routine daily works like preparing food or reserving accommodation. In the case of travelling within a group, many routined works are referred to the group and they have the responsibility to provide trip facilities. For instance, last year I attended a trip on my own and I that was not a good experience since I had to spend my time finding hotel, composing directions and providing food. Finally, I missed a lot of visiting sites and due to limitation in time, I had to finish my journey without visiting a monumental place.
My second reason addresses this idea that a trip should prepare humane to make better social interactions rather than merely visiting historical and natural locations. Many social interactions could be shaped if we join a group in pursuit of a trip. Based on my own experience, I could make friends in recent travels and one of them known as my best and closest friend. This possibility, the expansion of social interaction I mean, is not prepared in the state of traveling alone.
Last but not least, tour leaders encounter their fellowships with unique data and unpredictable experiences that make the travel worthwhile. For example, they may show a natural location in nature or they may offer their group special delicious food. I believe this may be owing to assimilate new travelers and this is justified by the competitive logic between different tour leaders. My friends reported about their unique experience in visiting Romania visiting natural locations in the forest only guided by their leader.
To sum up, based on all the arguments mentioned above, I prefer traveling within a group. This route of travel provides not only more time to visit places, but it also helps us to expand our social interactions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i mean, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92063492063 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79176749291 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9448309155 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139630785679 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054948421089 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607503539325 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838083114756 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471914802332 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.