Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many places these days have tour guides for tourists to help them know a city well. Some enjoy more within groups with tour guides whereas, some prefer to tour around individually without them. I prefer to travel in a group led by tour guides because they can help us know the city well, traveling in a group is more fun and its more convenient for us.
First of all, with a tour guide, we can acquire a better knowledge and information about the city. In other words, tour guides can explain to us in a better way since they are local here, so they can tell us much information which a tour book or internet might not tell. My experience is a compelling example of this. A few years back, I traveled with my family to Italy, and there we hired a tour guide and he asked us to join a tour group. And he took us to museums, forts, and told us the story behind each and everything. I had a great experience because of that. And if we would not have traveled with a tour guide, it would not be that fun and informative hence, this example demonstrates the benefits of traveling in a group with tour guides.
Secondly, it is more fun with tour guides in groups. We can meet many people. We can share different views, talk about different places and it's always more enjoyable. For instance, last year, I wanted to go on a tour of Thailand. Since all of my friends were busy so I decided to go alone. I joined the tour group, at first I was a bit nervous but then people in the group were too friendly and they made me feel comfortable fast. We traveled to many beaches, markets and tried all local dishes. It was one of the most memorable days of my life and enjoyed so much and made a few good friends. This example illustrates that a group tour with guides is not just informative, it includes lots of fun too.
At last, it is always more convenient for tour groups. What I mean is that as we are traveling to an unknown city, so with a tour guide can help us in various ways. They can have hotel ready for us with all touring schedule planned for us. We just have to pay the fee and rest they will manage everything. It is less headache for us as they are managing everything. As a result, it is much more convenient and easier for us.
In conclusion, traveling with a group led by a tour guide is better because we can get better information about the place, it is more fun and more convenient for us.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28104575163 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37696522675 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433551198257 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3465730434 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5769230769 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6538461538 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178678866391 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599681493251 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598390854549 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124198487106 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415981725214 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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