Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travel is the best way to share timing with friends and family. Moreover, it helps us to explore different places and pleasure our mind. However, a plethora of people contents that travel individually gives people more pleasure and helps to feel owns beauty but others disagree with the statement. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelmed. Among this controversy, I personally believe that travel in a group with a tour guide is the best way to enjoy. I feel this way for several reasons I will expound in the subsequent followings.
To commence with, a tour guide provides many facilities which are not possible in individual travel. They help us in many ways like select the hotel with affordable price, food, take care of luggage, provide a car when travelling and also provide recreation. But, in individual travel person need to handle everything and sometime after handling this issue they may not able to enjoy so much. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last year my family member went to Bali for there days without a tour guide. After take-off from the plane, we needed at least two hours to hire a car for the hotel to drop. Moreover, the location of the hotel was unknown and it was difficult for us to find. Besides, the next day of Bali it was hard to find the place to visit. Thus, we cannot enjoy so much but, if we had a tour guide we can easily solve those problems.
Furthermore, a tour guide knows about the location related to the cultural, traditional value and they can guide us those place easily in a short period. But, if individual go-to travel alone sometimes they can miss those place and can not match with the time schedule. For instance, in my last vacation in the USA, I listen about the place Monteray Acquriam which really fascinated me. Thus, I went there but I could not able to enter the place because of peaking a wrong day. Therefore, if I hire a guide they know the information about the place and I can easily peak a relevant day.
To recapitulate, I am on the opinion that travel with a tour guide is really helpful because they provide us with many facility and information which makes our tour more exciting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun facility seems to be countable; consider using: 'many facilities'.
Suggestion: many facilities
...ly helpful because they provide us with many facility and information which makes our tour mo...
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Line 13, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion which makes our tour more exciting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, at least, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6862244898 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56701110681 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505102040816 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0577740434 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4761904762 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166230110479 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546856064085 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638173250254 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116129257253 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688278496977 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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