Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is an important activity of relieving stress, enjoying new places, and understanding other nations' cultures and circumstances. Everyone has different viewpoints about excursion since they have divergent general standpoint. Personally, I believe that going to unfamiliar countries without the guide is the best way of appreciating these areas. There are certain drawbacks related to sightseeing with the counselor. Individuals should follow the specific plan, see only the positive side of the location, and be together with group members throughout the tour.
To begin with, people must adhere to the advisers' arrangement, which means they cannot stay in a particular region that they like for a long time. Some individuals might relish the precise area or landscape while having a journey with the band, so they will probably want to continue expending days there. However, people are unable to delay the agenda easily by virtue of their wish, thus they need to leave the place in order to keep up with the intention of others. On the one hand, tourists can sojourn as long as lengthy as they crave while sightseeing alone. Consequently, sightseers revel in matters as much as possible without acting in accordance with any procedure.
Secondly, it is essential to comprehend all aspects of the territories when people visit them. Nowadays, the guides tend to let travelers view exclusively reasonable characteristics of the location because they concern about individuals' feelings about their experience. Nonetheless, adventurers should reflect every personality of the nation to recognize the underlying truth of the country. Fortunately, they are capable of accomplishing it by going alone because no one will hide the authenticity.
Finally, people may end up spending all the time with group members who have negative demeanors if they travel with the band. Individuals are required to expend the journey period with others who share the same group, which is commonly thought as fine opportunity to get in touch with others. Nevertheless, it can be a horrible ordeal if somebody from the band has abhorrent behavior because people must be with them until the journey ends. By contrast, individuals do not have to experience this kind of thing if they visit the place alone.
In summation, I am of the opinion that discovering foreign territory alone is the first-rate way of appreciating unaccustomed place since there are definite disadvantages of joining the journey with the guide. To mention these downsides, we cannot stay in the place that we like for a long time, understand the disadvantage of the nation. Furthermore, we might end up having hard times with someone whom we do not like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28868360277 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94662338594 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584295612009 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7157653697 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.047619048 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.19047619048 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145660671096 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417362242607 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413996895961 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835601633287 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477414929615 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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