Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is the one of the best way to feel the life. It is our human nature to travel from here and there. It has begun since the creation of the world. By traveling, it was possible to explore the unexplored areas in our world. Individual or single travel is not the best decision than group wander lusting. Some would agree with this and others would have not. In my view, group travel is more fun and positive for travelers because of the following two important reasons.
The main reason is that traveling in a group helps to curb the burden of money. We are the human being of many class from our beginning. Some would have enough privileges for money others would have not. But, the enjoyment of traveling is a democratic choice. When, it is possible to go for tour by a group then it will avail the less prosperous man to being a part of this journey. For example, I was born in a remote city of Bangladesh. From my early days of my life, I had desire to travel my country but my financial situations always halted that choice. After coming in University, I joined a group who are very much enthusiastic about travel. And also they were forming a banner to get the fund from different organization. That made my dream come true although I was not enough money. As you can see that, traveling by a group would avail us to reach many organizations that will helps to bear the monetary difficulties.
Another reason is that group traveling more secured than single traveling. Security is one of the key issue during traveling. Many unavoidable occurrences are happenings during traveling for many reasons such as unfamiliar place, health issues etc. For instance, as I have had desire to travel. In one journey, we were going Coxobazar, the longest sea beach in the world. We reached our destination during midnight. And it was unfamiliar place for us and we had not any guide. Then, we resolved the problem by posting on social medias regarding our difficulties. We will never forget that scary night. This experience taught me that, it is important to travel withy group to avoid any danger.
In conclusion, it is possible that someone would exaggerated journey without group, but in long run it will create more hassle and futile. Group travel along with tour guide not only ensure our security but also helps to lay out economic burden to travel. So, we should travel byu group in order to get the better good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun class seems to be countable; consider using: 'many classes'.
Suggestion: many classes
...den of money. We are the human being of many class from our beginning. Some would have eno...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'exaggerate'
Suggestion: exaggerate
...sion, it is possible that someone would exaggerated journey without group, but in long run ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65581395349 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52842787898 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504651162791 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.618739631 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5806451613 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8709677419 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32258064516 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185078676145 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496521266123 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543406257188 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131838532614 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451719259949 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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