Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is an indisputable fact that in today's hectic life that human beings are under tremendous pressure in daily life, having time to put the mind at ease and ameliorate tension in order to revitalize fatigue is crucial. In this regard, some people approve of this idea that the best approach to achieve relaxation is spending spare time alone. On the contrary, others hold the opposite point of view. Personally, I concur with the notion that spending some quality time with friends or family is more beneficial in order to find tranquility and unleash stress. I substantiate my standpoint as follows.
To commence with, the more time spending with family and loved ones, the more sense of being supported and comforting leading to unwind the anxiety. To delineate, family members who have raised their children, know them better than every other person in the universe and love them unconditionally regardless of their fault or competencies. Taken this into consideration, should the human being encounter trouble in life, the relative will always be there side and advocate them and by doing so, provide a pleasant sense of gratifying culminating in ameliorating anxiety remarkably. Moreover, the family members are treasure troves of information and valuable experience that people can take advantage of these precious assets and utilize in order to overcome the predicaments. As a result, not only do family members are supportive in problematic periods of life, but they also share valuable experience and knowledge that they have gained in real life that meeting these elements give rise to put the mind at ease and diminish stress significantly.
The second worth-mentioning reason that comes into my mind is that spending enjoyable time with friends who are like-minded people could result in bringing a sense of happiness and joyfulness and mitigate stress. To elucidate this point, form a friendship is based on a common mindset and attitude which allows peers to share their notions and establish a constructive discussion on a variety of subjects. In this vein of thoughts, it is well-established by solid researches that spending time with friends and talking with like-minded person have an extremely positive influence on mental health by reducing dwindling feelings and experience sought-after feeling of sharing the moment with someone who has similar interests and attitude and contemplate issue analogous to each other. Thus, the more sharing time with friends, the more pacifying of anxiety and daily pressure.
To draw a conclusion, I strongly advocate the notion that spending time with friends and family is more advantageous for relaxation and ameliorate stress in comparison to being alone. This is because, not only do family always support each other in difficult situations, but they also have valuable experience and knowledge paving the way of mitigating the stress. In addition, friends who have an aligned mindset, provide the opportunity to unleash daily stress and have an enjoyable time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, in addition, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2544.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28898128898 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89892966563 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505197505198 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4947048222 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.647058824 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2941176471 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178214467686 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611612859912 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525941280542 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122629582385 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282757095637 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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