Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Due to today's lifestyle, people suffer more stress in their life, which is inevitable. Stress can influence people's mental health and the quality of their personal life, so they are trying to find a beneficial way to reduce it. Though some people believe that spending time alone is the best way to relax, others do not. In my opinion, being alone can not be the best way to relieve stress. I feel this way because of two main reasons, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, being alone can increase our stress, since we do overthink. Obviously, people spend more time thinking about all problems in their life, when they are alone, and even they imagine some events, which did not happen yet. Thus, their stress level will be increased. In contrast, if they spend their time with their friends and family, they can separate themselves mentally from their personal issues for an amount of time, which can aid them to decrease tension. For instance, I had to take an important exam to enter the university. A day before my exam, I preferred to spend my time alone to relax, but I had stress, and I could not control it. Moreover, my mind was thinking about bad things that made me cry, and I did not have any control over them. One of my friends called me. When she understood bout my situation, she suggested to me to visit her. Subsequently, spending time and talking with her could be helpful to reduce my stress because my mind could stop overthinking.
Secondly, spending time alone does not help to solve our problems. People's experiences are limited. In other words, their experiences are not sufficient for all issues in their life. Thus, when they face new problems and situations, they can not find the best way to solve their problems alone, so their stress level will be increased. On the contrary, if people talk to their family and friends, they can use their experiences to cope with their problems and stress. For example, I am working in a laboratory, and I had a disagreement with one of my colleagues last month. That disagreement made my work environment stressful, so I decided to talk with my mother, and she gave me some essential advice. Consequently, I could handle my tension and solve the problem with her suggestions.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement that the best way to reduce our tension is to spend time alone. This is because when we are alone, our brain starts to do overthinking readily, so it causes not only to diminish our stress but also to increase it. Moreover, spending time alone can not be helpful to cope with our problems and stress, because we do have not enough experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...arts to do overthinking, readily, so it cause not only to diminish our stress but als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70752688172 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58569040869 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434408602151 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0624670505 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0740740741 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2962962963 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220701183198 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722144385506 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800801440978 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17020710882 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607836496461 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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