Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individual.
The rate at which natural and human activities are affecting our immediate environment is alarming. With several damages that have been recorded in my neighborhood over the years, I need no one to convince me that it is about time that people come together to make a change. Personally, I believe that environment occurrences transcend what can be managed by an individual. There are two reasons why I feel this way which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, there is a saying that two good heads are better than one. In other words, the extent to which a group of five well equipped individuals will go obviously would be farther than a single person. My personal experience is a compelling example to illustrate this point. Three years ago, I was in my penultimate year of study in the university and the institution demands that every student is sent on an internship to get hands-on experience in their respective field of study. As a mining engineering trainee, I interned at a granite aggregate quarry. During my training, the first environmental problem I identified was emission if dust and particulate matter into the neighboring communities to the quarry. I thought it wise to make a change since I was originally poised to serving my community. Hence, I singlehandedly made some fliers and went around the communities, visiting one house and the other, to sensitize them on the effects of air pollution. I did this for a complete week and all I could notice was that very few number of people gave me an audience. One would say he is busy and the other would say she is used to inhaling dust after all. So, I deemed it fit to carry other six interns in the company who were from different institutions along. Our coming together as a team eventually wrought wonders that cannot be forgotten in the community. The town's occupants gave us their maximum attention seeing us in group and they were convinced that air pollution is of bad influence. Had I not requested the help of my colleagues, my efforts to manage the environmental conditions would have continually proven abortive.
Furthermore, the place of money in alleviating the problems in our environment cannot be overemphasized. We may find it difficult to do certain things or cover certain areas in our pursuit of sane environment if there is not enough financial support.
For instance, upon my graduation from the University, I worked with a mineral processing company in Lagos, Nigeria. After a while, I discovered that the company actually dumps the wastes products of their valuable minerals in an abandoned land close to a small community. This was really a source of groundwater pollution to the occupant of that area who depends solely on well water. To mitigate this problem, I thought of donating twenty pipe borne water to the community. However, the cost of achieving this project was so huge that I couldn't bear it alone. So, I wrote a letter to five of my friends for sponsorship. Eventually, the project was successful and the problem of groundwater pollution facial the community was eradicated. This example clearly demonstrate how limited a single person can be in an attempt to solve environmental problems.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that environmental challenges are too complex for an individual to manage singlehandedly, this is because he is limited in extent to which he can go and he may not have the financial capacity to ameliorate the problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1040, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...ek and all I could notice was that very few number of people gave me an audience. One woul...
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Line 6, column 538, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...hieving this project was so huge that I couldnt bear it alone. So, I wrote a letter to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, really, so, well, while, after all, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2893.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92006802721 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00132390536 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 316.0 212.727598566 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537414965986 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 942.3 618.680645161 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9922703946 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7586206897 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.275862069 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41379310345 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959013358885 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0218522628964 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277822003537 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589282956463 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231609156183 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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