Do you agree or disagree with the following statement If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.

It is no secret that every person's job plays a pivotal role in his or her life, and some people experience a difficult time choosing the right one. In this regard, some people believe that once they encounter the opportunity to take a secure job, they must grab the chance and get the job. On the other hand, some people have the opposite idea. They think that it is better to wait for a more satisfying job. I personally agree with the latter perspective. I will elaborate on my view in what follows.

First and foremost, it is established beyond doubt that having a satisfactory job is of paramount importance for mental health. Doing the job is an inseparable part of everyone's life, and when people enjoy doing it, they are actually happy with an important part of their life. If a person is unhappy at his or her job, they will encounter increasing stress level. On the other hand, people having a secure occupation, but not desirable, may feel uncomfortable, elevating their stress. Recently a study was carried out on two groups of people - one group had a satisfactory job, and the others were not happy with theirs. The result showed that people with satisfactory jobs reported remarkably fewer mental health issues such as sleep problems, depression, and violence. The result of this study confirms that job satisfaction has an undeniable effect on people's mental health.

The second reason worth mentioning is that enjoying a job brings about a greater level of success. It is well known that if an individual likes their job, they work harder, leading to more success and higher revenue. People who choose a secure job may feel happy about their work at first because of their income, but the key point here is that they do not try to make progress. After a variable amount of time, they may see themselves in a dead-end job. On the contrary, a person who enjoys his or her vocation increases the effort to improve. The company they work for also benefits such employees. What employer does not want a diligent employee?

All in all, it is crystal clear that job satisfaction is more important than safety in an occupation. Thus a person should put his or her interest before job security as job influences all aspects of life.

Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ble effect on peoples mental health. The second reason worth mentioning is that ...
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...important than safety in an occupation. Thus a person should put his or her interest...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, second, so, thus, well, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74936061381 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59869607958 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539641943734 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0483545993 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4090909091 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36053943557 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105385842051 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745070008857 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227809182906 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711934990712 0.0645574589148 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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