do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
It is established beyond any doubt that education has a vital role in people's life. Contemporary human lives in a sophisticated word and needs appropriate education to become successful. Some people believe that universities should increase the professor's salaries to increase the quality of their teaching. While others don't think so. If I were to choose, I would definitely enhance their salary and I will explore my reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, one should take into account the fact that increasing the professor's income causes them to enhance their motivation so they can teach efficiently. Actually, money is the best motivation for people in all jobs and raises their performance extremely. people with high salaries don't have any financial problems so they can focus on their job and exert all of their energy to complete it as well as they can. My notion on this fact has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. Following my graduation, I was hired in a company. At first, my salary was middle but if I worked hard, they would raise my salary so I tried my best to have a better income and It was the best encouragement for all employe because of the improper economic situation and economic stagnation in our country, all of us needed money to make a well-suited life.
Another remarkable reason is that by high salary, professors can reduce their stress and tension as a result, they can teach without any anxiety. In contemporary world, money has a crucial role in people's lives and it can work out all problems wich anybody face with and it is a significant fact that professors need a free mind to teach students and if they face with a variety of problems in their life they not only feel stress but also never able to teach students well. So for an efficient education system with high quality, we need healthy professors and we should provide all amenities for them. My uncle who is a professor is a compelling example and demonstrates this fact well. A few years ago my cousin suffered from bad blood cancer. So he needed money for his curative activities. While my uncle could not afford to buy his drags because of their implausible price so when he went to the class he could not teach well. Had he had sufficient income, he would teach without any anxiety.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that enhancing the professor's income can raise their performance because they can teach with a free mind and also money can encourage them to apply better teaching methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80459770115 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70107996976 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3101545723 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11312564984 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391551439998 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448455140821 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767561079471 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028259486525 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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