Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' jobs.
Nowadays, due to the strict limitations that academic studies and experiences apply, finding a career has become really difficult and the young youth has a problem finding a suitable job opportunity. In this way, I believe that children who follow their parents' career, potentially have a higher success rate than others for some specific reasons which will be mentioned in the following essay.
First of all, as mentioned in the beginning, today, to find a proper job, people need to hand out a high level of academic studies and dedicate about 4 or 5 years of their lives to gain higher study degrees. Hence, younger people do not have the chance to attend full-time jobs and they have fewer opportunities to become whatever they want. However, children who follow their parents' jobs, have the chance to start working even without having academic studies or join a part-time job while studying at colleges and universities.
Secondly, most of the companies and agencies want to hire people who have great experiences in the same careers. Unquestionably, the ones who follow their family career can gain these experiences much easier than others. To illustrate, someone whose parents are business agents and have their own marketing agency, can become a part of the company without any prior professional experiences and work for years to gain whatever they need in order to work for a better company. Hence, following parents' jobs can raise the probability of getting employed by well-known companies over the globe.
Finally, yet importantly, when starting a job, we are walking to a new world that has different rules, new aspects, and so many things to learn about. Definitely, if someone chooses to follow a family career, they can learn all these things in a shorter period and without leading to any harsh situations. This happens because the employers are the family members and they try to teach the rules and facts in a more supportive way.
To sum it up, in my point of view, following jobs similar to parent's jobs increases the rate of getting employed by popular, decreases the unemployment rate and makes the workspace environment more friendly and supporting. Hence, it is better for children to choose jobs similar to their parents' jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.024 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68079457541 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4587542033 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353587255305 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134887854835 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130637142365 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21321186357 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115202523276 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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