Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays there is an opinion that it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Personally, I believe that focusing on your specific area is the best approach and the way of succeed. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, to be the best in any profession it is necessarily to work hard and to have a clear road. Abstraction from outer environment leads to a deep knowledge and understanding of all aspects. Human brain is not an endless library, that is why it is so important to fill it with the most valuable knowledge. Continuously, by storing some useless information person forgets something essential, as a garbage simply replaces it. For instance, Sherlock Holmes is a perfect example of importance to focus, even though he is a hero of the book. He did not know the structure of the solar system or sport news, but as he was training his deductive methods for all his life, he became the most successful detective.
Secondly, people require stability in their lives, since otherwise they are under the pressure. Person can spend all his life deciding what would be better for him to choose, instead of moving in one direction and getting benefits. For instance, my classmate was unsure after graduation whether he wants to be a doctor or an economist. He split his time and tried to study in both directions to get an ability to choose later. He was stressed and could not enjoy his life, as there were always unanswered questions. Finally, he did not became a good professional neither in medicine nor in economy. Between two stools one falls to the ground.
In conclusion, I believe that it is critical to choose a path as soon as possible. Even though it is scary and hard to focus only on one subject, fortune favors the brave.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...answered questions. Finally, he did not became a good professional neither in medicine...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...een two stools one falls to the ground. In conclusion, I believe that it is crit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69817073171 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70807058016 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.58372518 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6111111111 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165197581342 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512759218457 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115988136572 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1245809084 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139950772435 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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