Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thanks to rapid transportation development, people could easily move to other countries and cities. Hence, it brings an issue to light, which is whether people should live in one town all their life rather than move from one place to another. From a personal point of view, I believe that it is better to live in different cities.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea is the fact that people should live in different places during different periods. To be more specific, people should leave the town where they lived in childhood and go to another town in order to study or find jobs. There are more opportunities in other cities instead of only one city. For example, after I graduated from university, I found a job in a city that is far from the city where I had lived for about twenty years. The opportunity of finding a job was much more in other cities, hence, I left my hometown and started a new life in the new city. As a result, it is crucial for everyone to stay in different cities while in their different stage of life.
Another point that I should deem is that by living in different residences, people can broaden their horizons. To delineate, if people live in one town all their life, they would only stay in their comfort zone and never step out of it. Moving from one place to another can make people know more about different cultures and different people. For instance, after I moved to another city, I was more familiar with the custom of the city and learn about different kinds of cultural events. It totally expanded my horizon.
What can be concluded from the aforementioned reasons and examples is that, therefore, it is better to live in different places during one's lifetime than live in one place. Living in different residences in different life stages is vital and also broadens people's horizons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tter to live in different places during ones lifetime than live in one place. Living...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64831804281 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50517891692 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492354740061 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4315986925 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282490854395 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102889620328 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801424032859 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209156929619 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362993458613 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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