Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When a person is facing the problem of settlement, they have two options to choose from. They can either stay in a city for their whole life or move from one place to another. I believe changing the town over the course of life would be a better choice. Through moving from areas, one can gain enough knowledge and experience that might be impossible to obtain if stayed stationary. Additionally, they can make new friends and expands their acquaintance circle.
To begin with, I genuinely have the opinion that switching between multiple cities during life can have positive effects on the dwellers' cultural and mental status. As the environment they live in it has different characteristics, they will learn new methods to cope with the hindrances they face. I can recall an experience that is a compelling example of this. I was living in my hometown, Kerman, for almost all my life until I have got admitted to a university in the Isfahan. Through moving to a new city and living in the Isfahan, I have learned how to cook, wash my dirty clothes, and basically to live independently and on my own. Moreover, I understood that life will not always go in the same path I desire. As a result, I managed to handle my emotional and financial problems gracefully. That is why I think changing the cities will help people to become mentally mature and gain experiences, which would be impossible in other scenarios.
Furthermore, I believe changing the city will help a person to make new friends. Sometimes it is essential to get out of the comfort zone to push yourself beyond your limit. Getting out of your comfort zone, which is most of the time the place you live in, can coerce you to make new friends. For instance, when I moved to Isfahan, I did not have any friends or family there. Consequently, it forced me to make new ones, which are now my life-long friends. Additionally, you may encounter your one and only! I found my girlfriend in Isfahan, the girl who changed my life forever.
To Conclude, I am of the opinion that moving from a place to another can be beneficial. A person can attain knowledge and experiences that will be conducive to their personal and professional life. Besides that, they can make new friends and expand their social network, which in turn has a positive impact on their state of well-being. think
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69586374696 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74249506432 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503649635036 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1115338819 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201856934547 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609555798314 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527273283211 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123946357075 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417435969822 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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