Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today many people are working as a researcher in many areas such as technology, medicine, sociology,... Because of these researches, humankind achieved much prosperous and wealth. Which is better in doing research? printed material or internet. While many people still prefer printed materials, however, many disagree. But personally, I prefer the internet to do my researches for the next two imperative reasons.
First of all, the internet is cheaper than printed materials. By advancement in IT technology, a lot of things got cheaper especially education. Printed materials need a lot of paper to publish, also it needs inventory and shipment. These items add extra cost to the printed materials price. One survey between Iranian universities has found that by spreading the use of the internet between students, the money that an average student spends for the books reduced by 25 percent in 2015. From my experience when I was a second-year student at the University of Tehran I had the Strength of Materials class, and we had a project about lubrication and bearing which had a few resources to research, so I had to buy professor Johnson book for 54000 Toman (Iran's currency), It was so expensive. Actually, I ran out of my money. But the next semester which I had the Strength of Material 2 class, I decided to do my project by the help of internet. I went to some reliable scientific sites like science-direct and I didn't buy any book, I remember that by doing this I saved some money for my other expenses. As this personal experience illustrates the internet is cheaper than printed materials.
The Second reason is that internet is available everywhere. One of the key specifics of the internet which led to its dominance in many areas is its availability. You can get access to the Internet almost in everywhere, in your home, class, on the bus. Also, it is available on many devices such as smartphones, tablets, laptops. For instance, when I was working on my last project for the undergraduate degree, I used to go to the central library in the Tehran university which had a lot of reference books. I remember that one day I had to borrow an important book about systems of control and bring it back to my room to study and take notes from it. But when I talked to the librarian she told me that it is a very valuable and old book and I don't have permission to take it away from the library. So with so many difficulties every day I had to go to the library and borrow that book and do my project with the help of it inside the library. But if I used the internet instead of that book, I would be very comfortable. So I decided to use the internet more in my research on the master's thesis. Briefly, the internet is available everywhere.
By the way of conclusion, the internet is better than printed materials today. Not only It's so much cheaper than books, but also it's accessible almost everywhere and any device. By the progress of technology, I can't imagine doing researches without internet, so if you unfamiliar with the internet, hurry up, it's time to get up and learn and use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , .
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Suggestion: Printed
...lth. Which is better in doing research? printed material or internet. While many people...
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Suggestion: didn't
...entific sites like science-direct and I didnt buy any book, I remember that by doing ...
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...saved some money for my other expenses. As this personal experience illustrates th...
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...t is a very valuable and old book and I dont have permission to take it away from th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'masters'' or 'master's'?
Suggestion: masters'; master's
...the internet more in my research on the masters thesis. Briefly, the internet is availa...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...evice. By the progress of technology, I cant imagine doing researches without intern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, while, for instance, such as, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2570.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 547.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69835466179 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83330540007 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453382084095 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5965154012 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2333333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287877358446 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849824886895 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669012215461 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188531708826 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239221346509 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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