Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the daybreak of development investigates always stimulates our way of living. Students need to use the best resources available as they conduct themselves. There are a few moot points about research methods. As far as my place is concerned, with weighing up the pros and the cons, I strongly subscribe to the point that it is better to use the Internet than printed materials. I have some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be aptly explicated in the ensuing paragraphs.
The foremost reason worth discussing here is that there is a colossal supply of materials on the net consequently, we can realize everything that we’d like for our analysis. To be more specific, today most of the books and articles first printed on the web and at the moment be accessible as written materials. As a case to the point, I vividly remember when I was a sophomore student at the university I had a project regarding management system of a library, and I was very stressful about that I found very fundamental project-related this in some printed materials, but not very up to date till then but on the internet, there was everything which I really searched. My own experience confirms that on the internet we can easily find large items that do not exist in published conditions.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that concerning increasing in paper cost, printed materials are too expensive. Many students, therefore, can not afford to purchase this material. however, on the web, everything is free or have an affordable that all students will use them. In addition, universities provide students with computer websites to freely download such materials.
Thirdly, if anybody wants to know or search for something, they have to read the entire book, but you can find exactly what they want by using the internet. Besides, It is very convenient, if some data is shown to be incorrect, to adjust the information on the web in a few seconds. Besides, It also supports the mind by using the internet. Itis extremely interesting that work on the internet or scanning data, according to scientists, enhances the performance of the brain much more than reading books, similar to solving puzzles.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that, using the internet for doing research is better than printed materials. Not only does the internet provide us with extensive content, but it is also free and cost-effective.
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...nformation on the web in a few seconds. Besides, It also supports the mind by using the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, in addition, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00961538462 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94461636424 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545673076923 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2929264495 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.684210526 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267601849151 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770046016043 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775376266269 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151760522259 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054817570312 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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