Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet.” Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that internet has had a profound influence on our life. While some people believe that paper based materials such as books and articles are good source of information, the others hold the view that internet can meet their research need. I concur with the latter group’s opinion. The reasons to substation my viewpoint are elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, internet provide us an updated source of online articles, which we can find them by searching key words. To be more specific, there are some websites helping us to find best results, just by searching main words. For example, Goggle website allow to find related texts or pictures or even films to our search. As a result, if we do a perfect research, it gives us the best results, which it is hard to find in books.
Furthermore, using internet is very fast and do not waste our time. To put this in a vivid picture, if we have limited time to find a text about special subject, use of internet will be a great idea. For instance, to get information about painters, it is fast just search his/her name on the internet rather than find related text between books.
In conclusion, taking all the reasons and points mentioned above into account, one can conclude that internet become an important part of our life. As it turns out, not only does it easy to find related subjects to our search, but it also help to find related texts and films to our search very fast.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: keywords
...es, which we can find them by searching key words. To be more specific, there are some we...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...ords. For example, Goggle website allow to find related texts or pictures or even films...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ted subjects to our search, but it also help to find related texts and films to our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 261.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67816091954 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46717116243 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8394887179 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9230769231 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14736581093 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580101719197 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546210096887 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904074208419 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573046629507 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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