Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Development of technology has led to an increase in the number of available news sources, which disseminate every single fact throughout the world immediately. As far as I am concerned, knowing about various events from all around the world is useful to some extent, even though the chance of being affected by them is very low. This essay will explore some of the reasons for my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
The first reason that contributes to the high significance of caring about the non-identical events happening around the world is the fact that this status can provide people with contrasting opportunities to increase their awareness about the world. To be aware of the consequences of climate change and global warming in one part of the world could raise the level of sensibility about the surrounding environment among the members of every society. Although the destruction of coral reefs in the coastal line of South America is not likely to have a major impact on the marine life of the ocean of India, it could warn people of that region about the diverse effects of disturbing the balance of nature around them.
Should people be aware of the negative aspects of putting nature in jeopardy, they will try harder to conserve the environment and prevent some future disasters.
Secondly, the high importance of having a considerable amount of information about the whole world lies behind the fact that human beings are social animals and care about their counterparts all around the world. The fact that they are not likely to be hurt by the events happening on the other side of the world does not mean that they are indifferent about the destiny and conditions of people who are in danger in those areas. A compelling example of this notion is the news of destructive earthquakes in different parts of the world. When people hear about a tremendously huge seismic activity somewhere else, they come together to gather money and other basic needs including food and clothes to help the people who are injured and lost their properties. As it is widely acknowledged, people of one part of the world send their goods and things by large airplanes to reach the other parts much far away beyond the immense oceans. It is because they perceive the pains of the injured people as their own pains and wish to help them as far as they are able to. If people do not follow different news about these events, they cannot help their counterparts.
On the whole, taking all the aforementioned reason into account, I believe that it is especially substantial to know about the diverse facts and events that happen all around the world despite the fact that we are not likely to be influenced by those events. Not only will this opportunity raise the awareness of people about their own surrounding, but it also provides them with the chance of helping other people who are in danger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84708249497 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62491487303 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48490945674 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3931004356 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5625 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0625 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226450275777 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822237070239 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509068684051 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130332330458 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450986236527 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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