Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
News has always been a crucial segmentation of everyone's life. A controversial argument that is often raised regarding this topic is whether it is better to know about the events happening around the world or not. While some may believe you don't need to know anything that is not going to affect your life, I would have an opposite view if I were obliged to take sides for several reasons, some of which I will elaborate on subsequently.
To begin with, knowing about the events around you gives you the chance to socialize with other people. Hardly can anyone deny the fact that socializing is an important aspect of every human being's life. What better topic to start a conversation than the events currently happening around the world? if your social partner knows about the event, you can sit and start talking about the effects and other aspects of the event, and If he doesn't, well, that's your chance to start describing that event passionately. I believe my opinion is greatly influenced by my personal experience. You see, a few years ago I had my university entrance exam and I was studying really hard for it, so hard that I could barely follow any news. I once went to a family gathering and I just sat down and looked at other people talking to each other. I had nothing to talk about to anyone. I haven't even seen most of those people for like a year. I was entirely silent and that was because I was not aware of anything happening around the world. It was one of the most boring gatherings that I went to. So as you can see, it is definitely better to know about the events around you.
Secondly, following the news helps you know where you stand in your career and life. We can not ignore the world around us and everything that is happening. If we don't know what's going on, we will most probably get lost in the paths we are taking. Knowledge about the events worldwide helps us understand the pace this world is moving at, so we can then adjust our speed if we are moving too slow, or too fast. We can even find out about new inventions that could facilitate our lives. Take old times for instance, where there was no source of news. People then would not know about new inventions that could ease their life, and although some places found something new to make life easier, some other's life would stay the same old-fashioned way. So obviously, knowing about the events around you is helpful.
I resist the temptation to explain more, hoping there is enough information already. To sum it up, following world news and knowledge about the events is beneficial. Because not only it will help you socialize with other people, it also helps you know where you stand in your life. I suggest everyone tries to follow at least a few news sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, at least, for instance, talking about, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55911823647 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38754490664 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49498997996 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2208852292 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2592592593 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4814814815 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2962962963 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314157287429 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882152245992 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750364924189 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209410688658 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019957926742 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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