Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We live in an increasingly complex world. There are widely differing views on the matter of whether students should give priority to understanding concepts and ideas or learning facts. Some people would suggest that learning facts is more important and students must learn as much facts as possible. I personally believe that it is more important for students to learn ideas and concepts, so they will be able to truly understand and use facts. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, it is indisputable to consider concepts more significant than facts since learning ideas and concepts lead to better understanding facts. Concepts are the keystone of facts. And this is why in the class we start learning concepts than facts. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I always had a problem with remembering math formulas. One they, instead of memorizing formulas without knowing about them I decided to prove them and learn the formula’s facts then memorize them, which made formulas remembering so easy because I did know the facts about them.
One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that the purpose of school is to prepare students for full participation in society. In order to be part of a community learners need ideas and concepts even more than they need facts. For instance, doctors rather than being familiar with every single medical fact facts as drugs name or writing a prescription, they need to know about safety, responsibility and bedside manner.
To sum up, I once again reaffirm my position that learning concepts and ideas far outweigh learning facts owing to firstly, learning concepts gives us opportunity to learn facts better. And secondly, knowing concepts and ideas cultivate more sociable and beneficial ones to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03205128205 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74445079946 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1553204596 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332370260194 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116451734088 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709853758147 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207374087756 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648057134463 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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