Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friends are the most essential part of human life because they are always with you when you have hardships and they share your happiness when you are joyful. Also, it is impossible to imagine my life without someone dear to me and someone who understands me better than anyone. So, I agree that we should keep our old friends and I feel this way for the following reasons. First of all, a person who knows you better is always a relief because he or she knows how to act around you, depending on the situation. So, the longer you have a friend, the better your life will be. My example is a compelling example of this. I have been friends with my close friend for many years. When I was preparing to participate in the singing competition, she always encouraged and praised me to do my best. After seeing the result of the competition, I felt really sad that I just wanted to be alone. Surprisingly, she understood it from my state and when I felt better, she came and hugged me tightly. If I did not have a friend like him, I would have already given up. Secondly, having lifelong friends means creating valuable memories because it is great to spend time with our friends and make interesting things together. We can make a bullet list with our close friends and try exhilarating things such as kayaking, bungee jumping, sky diving, and so on. On top of that, when we have someone we can trust our life on, we can improve many parts of ourselves. According to a study conducted by educators, competitiveness increases productivity by ten percent. In this hectic society, people who are embarking on a new journey, such as students, need to be in their best shape at every moment. So, studying and learning with a close one, will have positive effects on both of us. In conclusion, having lifelong friends is essential to us. Being with our best friends is a blessing, as well as fortunate. Also, we will create memorable memories and develop ourselves, which in result will be beneficial.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...hings such as kayaking, bungee jumping, sky diving, and so on. On top of that, when we hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, as for, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59269662921 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64146974071 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547752808989 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6519141858 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220568570815 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704966786183 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647450439204 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220568570815 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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