Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As people move forward in their life more and more, they feel friends are quite essential in their journey for many reasons. Some people hold the view that it is important to get in touch with old friends continuously, while others have the notion that we should get along with new friends rather. In my perspective, old friends coupled with old memories makes our stressful life easier, so I think it is important to keep old friends. I will substantiate my viewpoint in forthcoming paragraphs emphasizing on two salient reasons.
To begin with, we can always share our deepest sorrow with old friend who understands us much better than our new colleagues. For instance, last summer I had a big tragedy right after leaving my home to start university life; I lost my grandmother whom I loved very much. On one hand, I could not concentrate in my study, while on other hand; I was not being able to participate in any kinds of social activities along with my new friends. Albeit, my new friends knew that I lost my grandmother, most of them only expressed a simple sympathy and went on to enjoy their life never caring for me. In contrast, my best friend, with whom I spent my entire childhood, flew from India to come to my place and comfort me. This was only because she knew how much I loved my grandmother and what trauma I would be going if I had to lose her. Since we spend a lot of time with our old friend, they generally understand our nature and can really help us during hard times.
Besides, we can always cherish good old memories with our old friends and feel motivated. Generally speaking, it takes a lot of time to get along with new friend and build that comfort zone and bond of trust with them. However, if we are in touch with our old friend, we can always cherish memories with them to get motivated. For instance, I was trying to along with a new friend in my university after my best friend returned back to India. However, after some months she started completely ignoring me as she made her new boyfriend. Though I was happy for her, deep inside I realized that people are selfish and they only care for themselves. Once again, I felt alone, however, this time I cherished all those moments that I spent with my childhood friends. I started calling them and sharing my stories. In fact, all those talks helped me to fill confidence and motivation inside me. In essence, I realized that old friends are our assets and it is far better to keep in touch with them rather than making a new friend who might not even care about you.
By the way of conclusion, based on the aforementioned arguments, I firmly believe that keeping old friends is essential than trying to get along with new ones. I maintain this mainly because our old colleagues can understand us better during hard times and we can always cherish moments with them in order to feel motivated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, really, so, while, for instance, i think, in contrast, in fact, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 99.0 43.0788530466 230% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55769230769 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5013487486 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465384615385 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3278293575 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.043478261 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6086956522 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203966423883 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743565550396 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676606148736 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156452342297 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046532551158 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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