Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today.
The meaning of successfulness varies from person to person depending on their characters, cultures, talents and educational backgrounds. Regardless of its meaning, being successful is indispensable part of every human living on the Earth. Therefore, the question whether achieving success is easier today than the past has long been a topic of controversy among different people and circles. There are people who believe that the world in the past was limited and small and people could be successful easier; on the other hand, others believe becoming successful in modern world with advanced technological tools is easier than the past. As far as I am personally concerned the latter carries further weight since not only does technology assist people to achieve success but also does a competitive environment tempt people to attempt more.
Technological advancements aid people to achieve success more easily in different ways. In fact, technological advancements have profoundly influenced on educational programs and allow more people become literate. As a matter a fact, students can gain knowledge utilizing different source of information thanks to the advent of internet, electronic books, TV, radio and so forth. Therefore, the more literacy results in the more successfulness. Moreover, technology also assist those businessmen who want to embark on a new business or develop their previous career. For instance, advent of advanced mechanical equipment increases the productive and accuracy of products or different advertising tools help them to sell their product more easily. Therefore, technological tools aid different individuals in different ways depending on their skills, talents and goals to become successful.
In addition, living a cosmopolitan city with a competitive environment compels people to attempt more. In fact, there are people who consider life as competition and like to compete against others and make themselves stand out among others. In other words, they need an opponent to tempt them to attempt for their goals, therefore, such giant world is the best place for them. In such competitive environment, people will achieve more success in comparison to a stable environment. For instance, a carpenter in the past has not any incentive to extend his workplace since he was the only carpenter in the city or village but nowadays, there are several carpenters who works in a city, as a result of which those carpenter, who do not like to improve their work in the past, convince to compete. Therefore, competitive environment is an incentive to become successful in today life.
To wrap it up, advanced technological equipment accompanied by competitive environment aid people to achieve success easier than the past. In fact, development of modern cities is due to the increase of the rate of successfulness which is a good indication that people become successful easier than the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...y human living on the Earth. Therefore, the question whether achieving success is easier today than ...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...make themselves stand out among others. In other words, they need an opponent to t...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...giant world is the best place for them. In such competitive environment, people wi...
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Line 5, column 784, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'competing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: competing
...mprove their work in the past, convince to compete. Therefore, competitive environment is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2479.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42450765864 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05568410496 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490153172867 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3878533019 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.95 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.85 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208961954068 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703976296972 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817994245541 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158364105128 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098476959166 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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